英语四级作文常见易错点解析

 

　　使用修饰语时，要注意它们同主语的呼应，不可使其无所依附，或错误依附，从而造成悬垂修饰。可以通过两种方式对含有悬垂修饰语的句子进行修改

 

　　①修改主语，使主句主语等同于修饰语的逻辑主语；

 

　　②修改修饰语，把修饰语变成一个从句。

 

　　一、成分缺失

 

　　英语句子中有六个基本句式

 

　　(1)S+V主谓结构

 

　　(2)S+V+O主谓宾结构

 

　　(3)S+V+P主谓表结构

 

　　(4)S+V+O1+O2主谓双宾语结构

 

　　(5)S+V+O+C主谓宾补结构

 

　　(6)There be结构

 

　　原句At present，it is very mon that marriage across the nations

 

　　修正At present，it is very mon to find marriage across the nations.

 

　　原句If they from different untries，they ill have different living habits.

 

　　修正If they are from different untries，they ill have different living habits.

 

　　原句If ntinue，there is no room and no resources left for more people in the future.

 

　　修正If this ntinues，there is no room and no resources left for more people in the future.

 

　　二、悬垂修饰错误

 

　　修饰语的作用是描述其他的词，从而起到修饰、限定、强调或解释的作用。，修饰语与它们所描述的词之间关系紧密，这种关系对于考生来说十分清楚；当修饰语和句子中其他词之间的关系不是特别清楚时，这种修饰语被称之为悬垂修饰。当用分词、不定式、介词短语、动名词或省略句作修饰语时，考生受汉语影响，其作文中常会出现悬垂现象。使用时，要注意它们同主语的呼应，不可使其无所依附，或错误依附，从而造成悬垂修饰。可以通过两种方式对含有悬垂修饰语的句子进行修改

 

　　①修改主语，使主句主语等同于修饰语的逻辑主语；

 

　　②修改修饰语，把修饰语变成一个从句。

 

　　原句To finish the ork in ti，the machine is kept running all the ti.

 

　　修正To finish the ork in ti，e kept the machine running all the ti.

 

　　原句Looking out of the indo，the grassland stretch as far as the eye can reach.

 

　　修正Looking out of the indo，I can see the grassland stretch as far as the eye can reach.

 

　　原句Having heard the terrible nes，his heart beat fast．

 

　　修正When he heard the terrible nes，his heart beat fast．

 

　　原句At the age of ten，my grandmother died．

 

　　修正When I as at ten，my grandmother died．

 

　　原句To get ready for the trip，all the things she needed ere put into a suitcase．

 

　　修正To get ready for the trip，she put all the things she needed into a suitcase．

 

　　三、一致性错误

 

　　英语句子的一致性包括主谓一致，人称、时态、语态和数等的一致，以及句子成分前后的语法和逻辑性的一致。

 

　　原句“Six chairs”are not rrect here．

 

　　修正“Six chairs”is not rrect here．(如果主语为引语，谓语动词要用单数。)

 

　　原句Politics are more difficult than physics．

 

　　修正Politics is more difficult than physics．

 

　　原句Whether or not e'll go to Beijing have not been decided yet．

 

　　修正Whether or not e'll go to Beijing has not been decided yet．

 

　　原句Sotis the ealthy also needs help．

 

　　修正Sotis the ealthy also need help．

 

　　原句When I as in high school，you never kne hat to expect．

 

　　修正When I as in high school，I never kne hat to expect．

 

　　原句I as extrely sorry you are injured．

 

　　修正I am extrely sorry you are injured．

 

　　原句In high school e orked more as a group than as an individual．

 

　　修正In high school e orked more as groups than as individuals．

 

　　原句His job as a policeman．

 

　　修正He as a policeman．

 

　　四、并列结构误用

 

　　原句Before I selected the ne urse，my teacher arned of the difficulty of the urse and of its length．

 

　　修正Before I selected the ne urse，my teacher arned ho difficult the urse as and ho long it lasted．

 

　　原句We asked the store manager to sho us a gift that as inexpensive，useful and looked nice．

 

　　修正We asked the store manager to sho us a gift that as inexpensive，useful and nice looking．